Kumome Update & NEW Trailer: Feedback appreciated

Hey guys! I made a recreation named Kumome, and had hoped to launch it for you guys this month. Sadly apple's interface confused me a bit, and I ended up having to make a children model (with out multiplayer or group options), which delayed the launch of the official recreation. This type of killed all of my advertising and marketing efforts, and I’ve to begin from scratch once more however thats okay! I’m transferring ahead, and the youngsters' model offered some actually nice suggestions. Plus I received some nice opinions even when the sport is free haha

The ultimate construct of the sport is prepared, and I’d love some suggestions for the trailer I made. Please take into account that I’m not a video editor so I’d love your endurance.

Right here is the suggestions I used to be given:

• Attempt to synch the edits with the music a bit extra
• Showcase extra of the playing cards results from the beginning
• Put a name to motion on the finish (DOWNLOAD NOW)
• put character outfits at finish
• COOP & PVP Needs to be a lot earlier
• present a number of the story/dialogue choices
• a number of the ranges look boring (from gamers who’ve tried all the degrees who assume there are higher ranges to showcase)

I’d love any suggestions you discover notably pertinent.